Sebyth's Fall of Ald'Ruhn

This is based on picture(s) from a thread on The Elder Scrolls forum here. The setting is from the game Morrowind (The Elder Scrolls 3) but during the timeline of Oblivion (The Elder Scrolls 4). It depicts the battle that destroyed the town of Ald'ruhn.

I'm pretty sure I know where most of the mistakes are, I just don't know how to go about fixing them, so critique/suggestions on such is encouraged. I was trying a lineless style, and probably shouldn't have.

Two days, OpenCanvas 1.1, Wacom Graphire tablet.